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All this Love you're Given by ~Upsilon400:iconUpsilon400:



Why does she adore you
When you treat her like crap?
Is the world just that twisted?

Why does she still
Hang onto your arm
When she can smell strange perfume
On your neck?

Why does she listen
To all the lies you spin
When you walk in
At Four A.M?

I can't understand it.

You treat her so wrong.
You won't make her feel special.
You take her for granted.

So why?

Why in the world hasn't
She left you?

Maybe they don't make them like they used to.
©2009 ~Upsilon400
:iconupsilon400:

Author's Comments

Not a cry for attention; a cry for understanding and information.

Also not claiming to have any literary skill whatsoever.

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:iconbendwater88:
love it :heart: it seems like this story is too common in the world today :no:

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"The wasting of finite resources is everyone's business."
~Edward Cullen
:iconbloodyvalkyriereid:
Awesome work, but...
Can you make one that reflects for dudes to women as well?

Cause it happens to men also.

More so than most think lol -.-

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"I gave you my heart, and you chewed it up and spit it in my face. You don't care, but at least I know now all the times you did say you cared, they were bullshit"
:iconupsilon400:
Unfortunately, I'm too jaded against my gender from what I've witnessed, etc. to honestly be able to write a good work that translates. This comes from personal pain of lonliness and curiosity of why women choose to go for the "bad boys," and then come crying to the "good boys" when everything goes wrong, only to go out with another douchebag.

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How cute. She thinks it's Myspace.

"Whatever happened to Harry?"
"Oh, he don't need us. He happened upon an Essentials Kit. He opened it up, and it was filled with food, shelter, and love!"
~Brian Regan
:iconbloodyvalkyriereid:
And you called me Oracle?!
Lmfao, I've been preaching to all the girls I know on that topic for forever.

The recent art and words used in the description is WHY I make my art.

I won't ever get it either.
It's either they do what you just said...

Or they use the good guys till the next one comes, just to run back to the good guy when they fall on their face.

Sadly...the world needs some...Smarter...decisions.

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"I gave you my heart, and you chewed it up and spit it in my face. You don't care, but at least I know now all the times you did say you cared, they were bullshit"
:iconupsilon400:
Indeed. And I'm about willing to support extreme measures out of dissapointment with the lack of intelligence and selflessness in the world. Everyone expects to get something for everything positive they do.

The universe doesn't work like that. I do for people I care about out of the goodness of my heart, and expect nothing in return. So I get nothing in return... Okay, nothing is too strong a word, I do recieve continuing friendships and people to talk to, and admittedly, a never-ending source of entertainment, as twisted as that is.

My point is, the universe will dispense unto you everything but what you need.

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How cute. She thinks it's Myspace.

"Whatever happened to Harry?"
"Oh, he don't need us. He happened upon an Essentials Kit. He opened it up, and it was filled with food, shelter, and love!"
~Brian Regan
:iconbloodyvalkyriereid:
That's true -.-
Sadly, the truth is that we all live in this world and depend on someone else, even if we say we don't.

the small ways justify the means.
I've been treated miserable by family a major part of my life, but I rely on friends cause they always have my back and support me the best they can.

I will not lie, they tend to be douchebags often times, however as you stated, I receive the friendships and that's what I cherish most.

Also, I feel that if I lower myself to the level of those ignorant enough to pick on the weak and do utterly stupid things, even among friends, that it'll make me a piece of shit, just like them.

I actually feed off their stupidity, and ignorance.
It truly proves what kind of people lie in the world.

then I use that to power what I want in life, motivating my future.

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"I gave you my heart, and you chewed it up and spit it in my face. You don't care, but at least I know now all the times you did say you cared, they were bullshit"
:iconupsilon400:
Hah, I too feed off the stupidity, ignorance, and even sadness and fury, of friends. True, I try to help them back to their feet, but it reminds me that they are no greater than myself, you know? Just periodically luckier.

I don't know about you, but my closest friends are female, so I kind of get a feminine take on some things... Though much of that is buttressed with preconcieved notions fed by the parents and the media... How easily we are corrupted.

Part of me wants to know if you, yourself, are male or female. But another part knows it doesn't matter, since you seem to see the world as I do.

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How cute. She thinks it's Myspace.

"Whatever happened to Harry?"
"Oh, he don't need us. He happened upon an Essentials Kit. He opened it up, and it was filled with food, shelter, and love!"
~Brian Regan
:iconbloodyvalkyriereid:
I myself am a male.
I just experience a lot of unfortunate things.

Often I draw females, or work on females and turn it into art.

I am so amazed by females that I often wonder what makes their thought patterns so much more different from males, tho they are in fact human as well as males are human.

I've interest in this girl who I say I Love, cause deep down inside, I know I do. She however is...very broken inside from bad experiences, but what is painful is that now she's doing the same actions that caused her harm...

To me...

and since I know what pain she's taken, I don't wish to abandon her, but...she's not giving me much choice.

You and I see the world the same, cause we see through the false ties that make the world "Beautiful"

One can only see and truly love the "Good" if they can see the darkness and grittiness that is the bad as well.

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"I gave you my heart, and you chewed it up and spit it in my face. You don't care, but at least I know now all the times you did say you cared, they were bullshit"
:iconupsilon400:
Their thought patterns aren't that different... at least not from mine, I don't think... Frankly, I understand females more easily than males, but that's because (1) I have overpowering emotions and (2)I want to understand them.

True, most is still an enigma... I would like to tell you of past experiences and how confused I am, alas, some of my bad/unfortunate experiences are some of my watchers, and I have no wish to hurt their feelings... no matter how badly they may have hurt mine.

That's what it boils down to for me, though... Inconvenience... I hate to inconvenience people, so I overthink everything to the point that it's either too late, or I simply drive myself to madness over a trivial matter. Over things that shouldn't matter to me... Like who's doing whom, after I was rejected by Who... It's not my concern anymore, so why do I obsess over it?

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How cute. She thinks it's Myspace.

"Whatever happened to Harry?"
"Oh, he don't need us. He happened upon an Essentials Kit. He opened it up, and it was filled with food, shelter, and love!"
~Brian Regan

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